REVIEWS, NOTES AND COMMENTS
BY THE EDITOR
APPRECIATION OF MISS MACNEILAN'S
AN INTERPRETATION OF THE LIFE AND POETRY
OF COATES KINNEY.
An Interpretation of the Life and
Poetry of Coates
Kinney. By Debora M. MacNeilan. (Columbus: Ohio
State Archaeological and Historical
Society. 1931. pp.
88. Cloth $1.00; paper 50 cents.)
No publication of The Ohio State
Archaeological and
Historical Society in recent years has
been followed
more promptly by appreciative comment
from the press
than Miss MacNeilan's work entitled An
Interpretation
of the Life and Poetry of Coates
Kinney. It was issued
from the press early last April and its
reception clearly
indicated that perhaps the Society has
been neglecting
somewhat the literary achievement of
the state. Emi-
nence in statesmanship and war and
growth in wealth
and population naturally afford the
themes of major im-
portance. Literary progress, however,
helps to build and
sustain the state and contributes much
to education
and progress. In fact, a state's
attainments in literary
culture is a safe index to its
educational progress.
Among the poets who have made material
contribu-
tions to Ohio is Coates Kinney. Without
entering upon
any account of his life or criticism of
his literary work
we shall here reproduce some estimates
of both and their
portrayal by Miss MacNeilan, as
expressed in reviews
from the Ohio press.
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Reviews, Notes and Comments 651
The Ohio State Journal, which
Coates Kinney at one
time edited, on April 20 published an
extended apprecia-
tion with a front page portrait of Miss
MacNeilan.
From this we make the following
quotations:
An interpretative biography paving the
way to a broader
knowledge and just appreciation of Ohio
literature has been
written by Miss Debora M. MacNeilan, 402
E. Lane Ave.
It is titled An Interpretation of the
Life and Poetry of
Coates Kinney, and
has been published in book form by the
Ohio State Historical Society.
The biography of Kinney, soldier, poet,
editor and lawyer,
was written by Miss MacNeilan as her
thesis for a master of
arts degree, which was awarded her at
Ohio State University
last August.
Kinney, whom the author pictures as
"representative of a
group of Ohio poets whose poetry is
national in its scope and
influence," was an editorial writer of The Ohio
State Journal
in 1877 and 1878, while Gen. Comly was
in Hawaii.
Kinney, Miss MacNeilan declares,
"had the poet's all-seeing
eye, for beyond the appearance of things
he saw the reality,"
and he chose immortality as the theme of
his life, which was "a
life of thinking, a life in the
direction of truth."
"Because of his great theme,
death," she wrote, "his poetry
has a melancholy tone which is kept
sweet by the voice of hope
singing throughout, now faintly, now
triumphantly.
"But the future is not far off when
men will realize the
greatness of Coates Kinney. Now he
belongs to Ohio, but ul-
timately he will belong to the world for
all time."
Throughout the book, the author brings
in the various works
of Kinney as they apply to the high
points in his life.
Among them is Kinney's popular lyric,
"Rain on the Roof,"
which brought him fame in 1849. It tells
of his first sweetheart
in Springboro, Warren County, Ohio, whither Kinney
moved
with his parents from his birthplace in
Yates County, N. Y., in
his fourteenth year.
"The Poem," to quote Miss
MacNeilan, "touched the heart-
strings of America; in fact it vibrated
so perfectly with the
homely experience of all that it soon
became the property of all."
"Kapnisma" she rated as
Kinney's masterpiece. In this poem
as well as "Pessim and Optim"
and "A Keen Swift Spirit,"
Miss MacNeilan found Kinney
"reasons his problem in terms of
evolutionary pantheism."
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Mr. Thomas Emmett Moore in the
Cincinnati En-
quirer of April 18, says:
A critical estimate of one of America's
greatest poets has just
been published by the Ohio State Archaeological and
Historical
Society. It is a pioneer venture in the
revival, and firmer crystal-
ization, of the fame of the later nineteenth-century
poets of Cin-
cinnati and the Middle West. This movement, which has
the
approval and encouragement of the Ohio
State University, and of
every friend of the vast cultural
development which found in
Cincinnati its crux and center, should
be supported by the gen-
eral public with enthusiasm.
This revival has come in the form of a
critical biography en-
titled An Interpretation of the Life
and Poetry of Coates Kin-
ney, written
as a master's thesis by Debora May MacNeilan, a
graduate student in the English
department of Ohio State Uni-
versity.
The author shows force--she is at one
with the dreamer's
thinking concerning the problems of
death, love, science, nature--
with the compelling principles of the
poet's life, the thought which
urged his thinking into eternal motion.
Only a woman's intuition could do that,
balanced by literary
judgment, fidelity and finished critical
sense.
Miss MacNeilan is both philosopher and
devotee at the shrine
of genius. So, after 27 years, Coates
Kinney's "little boat asleep"
fixes its uninterrupted course, guided
by a knowing, understand-
ing pilot.
It well may be that this venture of the
Ohio Archaeological
Society is prophetic of literary largess
yet to come, and that the
grand group famous in Cincinnati and the
Nation at that time, in-
cluding the Cary sisters, William Haines
Lytle, William Henry
Venable, John James Piatt, William Dean
Howells and Edith
Thomas, may find as able and sympathetic
chroniclers as the gifted
author of the brochure dedicated to
Coates Kinney.
It is, of course, true that this author
enjoyed a distinct and
distinctive advantage in being the first
to make available the bio-
graphical and other data in the
possession of Professor Emerson
Venable, Colonel Kinney's neophyte,
intimate friend and literary
executor, whose interest in the
"classic era" of Middle Western
poetry and literary effort has made him
one of the best sources of
information concerning an illuminate
period; a rich inheritance
indeed.
Mr. Galbreath and the Ohio State
University are to be con-
Reviews, Notes and Comments 653
gratulated and encouraged in their
effort to keep alive the in-
terest of a monumental time in this section.
The Columbus Evening Dispatch of
April 28 con-
tains the following estimate:
THE COATES KINNEY BIOGRAPHY
An interpretative biography of the late
Coates Kinney, poet
and editor, written as a thesis for
graduation by a graduate
student of the State university last
year, and published by the
State Archaeological and Historical
society, cites a number of
poems by this author which it is claimed
form a basis upon which
to rest his reputation as a poet more
substantial than that by which
he is best known--"Rain on the
Roof."
The writer of the biography is qualified
to form literary
judgment and her estimate of some of the
less known poems of
Colonel Kinney is no doubt correct, but
"Rain on the Roof" is
written in the vein of the common
people, deals with their cus-
toms, and through it runs the home theme
which has a special
appeal to our people. In their opinion
this will continue to be his
masterpiece, and his name and the name
of this poem will be
inseparably linked in their minds.
Ohio has had quite a number of minor
poets and it would be
a fine thing if others could be made the
subjects of similar studies
on the part of graduate students in
arts. The State Archaeological
and Historical society has done a good
service in lending its aid
and publication facilities to the
bringing out of this biography of
one of Ohio's best known literary men.
The same paper in its review of May 10
adds:
Could Coates Kinney read this eulogy of
his life and work,
he would, no doubt, be gratified. If not
adequately discriminat-
ing, it is sympathetic and properly
appreciative of the fine spirit
which, through most of his 78 years,
struggled for expression.
His life belongs to the last
three-quarters of the nineteenth cen-
tury. He was born in New York state in
1826, and came with his
father's family to Ohio in 1840. As a
boy he had lived near to
Nature in one of the beauty spots of
earth, acquiring a love of
Nature which influenced him throughout
his later years.
While working in a sawmill in Warren
county he tried his
hand at poetry, which his brother
laughed at; when in love and
at school, he wrote poetry, as he did
also while he was teaching,
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studying law in Lebanon, serving as
editor in Xenia, West Lib-
erty, Springfield and Cincinnati; as a
soldier in the Civil war; or
as a senator in the Ohio legislature. He
wrote much, largely neces-
sarily in prose, and spoke eloquently in
public, but his special
delight was to give to his fancy the
wings of meter.
Critics have spoken in high praise of
this loved work of his,
but the common people have given him
fame for but one of his
lyrics. "Rain On the Roof," a
tender melancholy poem which
touched the hearts of people far and
near, was set to music and
abides yet in the memory of many who are
living. He wrote the
ode for the Ohio centennial--which was
held in Columbus in
1888--a notable production but chiseled too
fine to reach the
popular heart. And that is, perhaps, the
criticism is to be passed
on most of his poetry. He ranks with
Piatt and Venable, Curry
and Gallagher in refinement of thought
and beauty of expression
but, like them, he, for the most part,
failed to write that which
reached the heart and is cherished in
the memory.
As far as the common people are
concerned, Coates Kinney,
like Julia Ward Howe, is loved for a
single poem. His was writ-
ten after listening, one night, to the
patter of the rain on the roof
of the farmhouse near Xenia, in which
the family had once lived.
For that poem and the story of it, this
study by Miss Mac-
Neilan would be well worth while. But
there is more in Coates
Kinney's life and struggles and
character that are well worth
knowing, and the facts are here well
reviewed. The brochure
belongs properly in every library of
Ohioana.
Of Miss MacNeilan's book, Mr. Clark B.
Firestone,
in the Cincinnati Times Star of
June 23, writes as fol-
lows:
Of a philosophical poem by Coates
Kinney, William Dean
Howells wrote: "It is a late-coming
of one who has lingered long
in the repute won him by a single
charming lyric." The lyric
was "Rain on the Roof." Half a
century ago, everybody who
knew any poetry could quote a goodly
number of the lines. They
gave the author a country-wide
reputation.
Born in New York in 1826, but removing
with his parents to
Ohio at an early age, Coates Kinney
lived an interesting and var-
ied life. He studied law under Thomas
Corwin and was ad-
mitted to the bar in Cincinnati. He
edited a monthly literary mag-
azine. Like Longfellow, Whittier and
other American poets of
the time, he composed a long metrical
narrative about the Indians.
He served behind the lines in the Civil
War and came out as
Reviews, Notes and Comments 655
brevet lieutenant colonel. For two years
he was leading editorial
writer on the Cincinnati Times, and
therefore is of the Times-
Star family He was
a fiery and stirring speaker, serving in the
Ohio Senate. He died in 1904.
In her interpretation, Miss MacNeilan
well says: "Words were
a constant challenge to him. In his
poem, 'The Thought and the
Word,' he discloses the struggle between
Thought, the soaring
eagle, and Word, the creeping serpent--a
fight in which the eagle,
rising heavenward with the snake, is
suddenly brought low by
the strangling serpent. But a consciousness of the force and
beauty of words made him a true adept in
their use." One illus-
tration of many is his poem, to his baby
daughter, whose voice was
as a bird's "making sweet little
speeches without any words." A
fine stanza from another lyric is the
following:
"My soul was a gloom that had
blotted heaven;
And thine was a fine ascending fire
That streamed it through with a luminous
leaven
Of hope of morning and day's
desire."
Like his own old apple tree, his was
"the grace of blossoms
fruiting into gold." The friendship
between him and William
Henry Venable--Emerson Venable is
Kinney's literary executor--
was an inspiring spiritual comradeship.
The poet's longest work,
"Mists of Fire," brought out
in his old age, had for its theme the
immortality of the soul, and the
trenchant thought in it antici-
pated modern conclusions. More musical
than this, however, and
more haunting even than "Rain on the
Roof"--or so the reviewer
thinks--are the lines called "Emma
Stuart." The first three and
the last of the six stanzas are reprinted here:
"O the voices of the crickets,
Chirping sad along the lea,
Seem the very tears of music
Unto melancholy me;
And the katydids' responses
From among the locust leaves
Are the weak and wild regrettings
Of far other autumn eves.
"For they mind me, Emma Stuart,
Of the bygone blessed times,
When our heartbeats paired together
Like sweet syllables in rhymes;
Ere the faith of love was broken--
Ere our locked hands fell apart--
And the vanity of promise
Left a void in either heart.
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"Art thou happy, Emma Stuart?
I again may happy be
Nevermore: the insects crying
In the grass and on the tree,
As if singing songs of sorrow
At the coming of the frost,
Are to me love's fallen angels
Wailing for their heaven lost.
??
"No, ah no! Along the pathway
Grows the high untrampled grass,
Where the cricket stops to listen
For thy wonted feet to pass;
But thy footsteps, Emma Stuart,
Press no more the doorway-stone,
Trip no more along the pathway--
And the cricket sings alone!"
Was more charming and wistful lyric ever
written by an
American poet? By her sympathetic
interpretation of its author
and his writings Miss MacNeilan has
performed a service to
letters. C. B. F.
The Cleveland Plain Dealer of
Wednesday, April 29,
publishes a two-column review of Miss MacNeilan's
book. From it we make the following
extracts:
COATES KINNEY
Prolific as the intellectual soil of
Ohio has been in the pro-
duction of national presidents,
legislators, soldiers, leaders in all
the learned professions, invention and
modern industrial manage-
ment, it seems to lack those particular
ingredients that produce
either renowned poets or great
preachers.
Our Chases, Wades, Stantons and
Garfields readily match
the Winthrops, Everetts, Lodges and
Sewards of New England
and New York, and the Lamars and Davises
of the south, but we
have not produced a Longfellow, a Whittier,
a Holmes or a Riley.
It is doubtless with such thoughts as
this in mind, Debora
May MacNeilan, a graduate student of the
English department
of Ohio State University, has recently
given to the people of
Ohio, in book form, An Interpretation
of the Life and Poetry
of Coates Kinney, written as a master's thesis for the university
faculty.
Coates Kinney, editor, poet, and
"dreamer of dreams" was
born in Keeuka, the crooked lake
district of northern New York,
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and was in his fourteenth year when his
father removed the
family to Springboro, Warren County, Ohio.
TRUTH
"A study of his life," Miss
MacNeilan tells us, "reveals his
theme to have been immortality. His life
was a thinking life in
the direction of truth. Emerson Venable says of him:
'Coates
Kinney is distinctively the poet of
science, the poet of evolution'."
In his earliest boyhood Coates Kinney
seems to have "lisped
in numbers as the numbers came,"
and though engaged in the
arduous task of attending a country
sawmill, he evinced all the
ardor for mental development that marked
the early educational
struggles of Abraham Lincoln.
It was at the doubtlessly crude
Springboro Academy that he
mastered ten books of Euclid in eleven
weeks and was leading
the school in algebra and grammar. Like
Lincoln, also, he was,
at an early age, deeply concerned with
the problems of human
slavery, but unlike him, openly and
vigorously espoused the
cause of abolition.
When the Civil War clouds finally burst,
Coates Kinney ap-
plied to Gov. Salmon P. Chase at
Columbus and received an ap-
pointment as major and paymaster of the
United States army,
serving until Nov. 14, 1865, when he
retired with the brevet rank
of lieutenant colonel.
Before this he had met and married Mary
C. Allen, the
youthful daughter of a Virginia family,
then living in Xenia,
Ohio. He was now prepared to enter a
field congenial to his heart
and mind. He therefore accepted the
editorship, first, of a weekly
newspaper at Mount Liberty, but very
soon after took the editorial
chair of the Xenia (O.) Torchlight, which
Whitelaw Reid had
just vacated to join Horace Greeley on
the New York Tribune.
This paper he edited and owned for many
years, when his columns
were regarded as a sort of political
mentor to a large portion of
people in southwestern Ohio and is said
to have been probably
more widely quoted than any other
newspaper in Ohio.
HIS WORK
In the meantime, and for many years,
Coates Kinney was
also contributing regularly to various
American literary maga-
zines, including Charles S. Abbott's Genius
of the West, a
monthly literary publication in
Cincinnati, the National Era, an
Abolitionists' paper published in
Washington, D, C., to which
John Greenleaf Whittier was a constant
contributor, and the
Ladies Repository, one of the early American publications cater,
Vol, XL--42.
658 Ohio Arch. and Hist. Society Publications
ing to the feminine population of the
country in both prose and
poetry.
It was in Abbott's printing office that
the poet set up with
his own hand and published his first
volume of 27 poems in-
cluding a long narrative and partially
biographical ode based on
the war between the New York tribes of
Mohawks and Keeukas.
In 1868-69 he was leading editorial
writer on the Cincinnati
Times Star and in 1877, when President Hayes named Gen.
Comly
of the Ohio State Journal to be
our minister to Hawaii, Coates
Kinney took his place as editor of that
well known and influential
publication.
In the year 1885, Coates Kinney's 24 years of
editorial duties
came to a close. He was then the editor
and owner of the Spring-
field Globe Republic.
THE END
In January, 1904, the aged
editor was seized with an attack
of the grippe and was taken from a hotel
in Cincinnati to the
Presbyterian Hospital of that city,
where he lingered a few days
before solving for himself the
ponderable unreality of death.
Sunlight on the Southside--Lists of
Tithes. Lunen-
burg County, Virginia,
1748-1783. By Landon C.
Bell. (Philadelphia: George S. Ferguson
Com-
pany. 1931. pp. 503.)
Privately printed, a few copies are
still in the hands of the author
which may be had at $15.00 each.
Mr. Landon C. Bell of Columbus, Ohio,
formerly of
Virginia, has published another
valuable volume for
genealogical research workers. This is entitled Sun-
light on the Southside--Lists of
Tithes. Lunenburg
County, Virginia, 1748-1783.
In the introduction to this volume the
writer tells us
what in accordance with the opinions of
Virginia his-
torians constitutes the Southside of
the Old Dominion.
Those whose opinions are quoted are Dr.
Philip Alex-
ander Bruce, Honorable William Cabell
Bruce, Dr. Lyon
G. Tyler, Honorable Armistead C. Gordon
and Dr.
REVIEWS, NOTES AND COMMENTS
BY THE EDITOR
APPRECIATION OF MISS MACNEILAN'S
AN INTERPRETATION OF THE LIFE AND POETRY
OF COATES KINNEY.
An Interpretation of the Life and
Poetry of Coates
Kinney. By Debora M. MacNeilan. (Columbus: Ohio
State Archaeological and Historical
Society. 1931. pp.
88. Cloth $1.00; paper 50 cents.)
No publication of The Ohio State
Archaeological and
Historical Society in recent years has
been followed
more promptly by appreciative comment
from the press
than Miss MacNeilan's work entitled An
Interpretation
of the Life and Poetry of Coates
Kinney. It was issued
from the press early last April and its
reception clearly
indicated that perhaps the Society has
been neglecting
somewhat the literary achievement of
the state. Emi-
nence in statesmanship and war and
growth in wealth
and population naturally afford the
themes of major im-
portance. Literary progress, however,
helps to build and
sustain the state and contributes much
to education
and progress. In fact, a state's
attainments in literary
culture is a safe index to its
educational progress.
Among the poets who have made material
contribu-
tions to Ohio is Coates Kinney. Without
entering upon
any account of his life or criticism of
his literary work
we shall here reproduce some estimates
of both and their
portrayal by Miss MacNeilan, as
expressed in reviews
from the Ohio press.
(650)