A BRAND FROM THE CRITICS' FIRE: OR A
WORD FOR
WHITLOCK
by WINTHROP TILLEY
Associate Professor of English,
University of Connecticut
Now in midcentury, when so much badly
needed revaluation of
America's literary product is going
forward, seems an appropriate
time to speak a word for Brand
Whitlock. The new Literary History
of the United States by Spiller and others mentions Whitlock only
as a single-taxer, a
"humanitarian" and an early realist, and adds
that The Thirteenth District is "concerned with the professional
politician."1 Quinn's
estimate in American Fiction, the most exten-
sive by a literary historian, is
incomplete, and tends to value Whit-
lock's work pretty much in accordance
with its popular reception.2
Even Kazin in On Native Grounds makes
only brief and misleading
mention of Whitlock as the author of The
Thirteenth District,
which is spoken of in the same breath
with that low piece of
hackmanship, Alfred Henry Lewis' The
Boss.
Brand Whitlock (1869-1934) has fared
better at the hands of the
historians than the litterateurs. A
biographical sketch by Allan
Nevins is contained in The Letters
of Brand Whitlock, which ap-
peared under Nevins' editorship in
1936. Whitlock was born in
Urbana, Ohio, and spent his boyhood in
one small Ohio town
after another, his father being a
Methodist preacher. Following his
graduation from high school in Toledo,
he was a reporter for three
years on the Toledo Blade and
thereafter for three years more on the
Chicago Herald. In 1892 he was sent to Springfield as legislative
reporter. He met and admired Governor
Altgeld and in 1893 became
executive clerk in the secretary of
state's office. He also began the
study of law. In 1894 he was admitted
to the bar. Shortly after he
opened a law office in Toledo in 1897,
he became associated with
and in time the close friend of Sam
("Golden Rule") Jones, reform
mayor of Toledo, and on Jones's death
in 1904, ran for mayor on
1 Robert E. Spiller and others, eds., Literary
History of the United States (3 vols.,
New York, 1948), II, 978, 1255;
III, 150, 352.
2 Arthur
H. Quinn, American Fiction (New York, 1936), 635-640.
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an independent ticket. He was elected
in 1905 and served as mayor
for eight years. Having retired from
politics, as he thought, in 1912,
Whitlock was appointed minister to
Belgium by President Wilson
in 1913 and served in that capacity through and after the
war
years, at Brussels and later at Havre
and then at Brussels again,
until he was replaced by a Harding
appointee in 1921. So ended
Whitlock's public career, the brilliant
success of which may well
have helped obscure the worth of his
creative work. Thereafter he
lived quietly, mostly at Cannes, and it
was there that death came
in 1934.
Here only his more substantial
nonfiction will be given brief
mention. The three major items are his
autobiographical Forty Years
of It (1914), which deals largely with his active political
life in
Ohio, Belgium: A Personal Record (1919),
one of the few classics
growing out of World War I,3 and Lafayette
(1929), which Nevins
characterizes as "incomparably the
best biography of Lafayette in
any language, a substantial
contribution to the history of both the
American and French Revolutions, and a
work of absorbing in-
terest."4 The Little Green
Shutter (1931) takes for its apparent
subject prohibition and drinking in
America; actually it is a
thoughtful and extremely readable essay
on the nature of democratic
government-an essay which would be of
small comfort, in the
unlikely event that they should read
it, to those northern liberals
so hot to cram comprehensive civil
rights legislation down southern
throats.
Whitlock's creative work-his true-love,
as his letters make clear
-was accomplished in two periods: from
1898, the date of pub-
lication of his first story, to 1912,
and after the long and arduous
Belgian experience, from 1923 to 1931.
Of the six books of the first period,
two, The Gold Brick (1910)
and The Fall Guy (1912), are
collections of short stories, many
of them stories of politics. The other
four are novels-The Thirteenth
District (1902), Her Infinite Variety (1904), The
Happy Average
3 It is, by the way, a shock, on reading
from the pages dealing with the German
occupation, the Cavell affair, and the
burning of the Louvain library, to realize that
the rejection by Germany of the
painfully slowly built moral edifice of Western
European civilization was no invention
of the Nazis. Who besides William L. Shirer
in our day fully realizes it?
4 Letters, lxvii.
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(1904), and The Turn of the Balance (1907).
Her Infinite Variety
is brief and amusing. Actually it is
more like a short story than a
novel, being a treatment of a single
incident--an effort to get a
woman suffrage bill through the
Illinois legislature. But slight as
the story is, the characterization of
the chief male character, well-born
State Senator Morley Vernon, is quite
skilful, and Whitlock depicts
convincingly the uneven and shifting
mixture of desire for public
service and for personal glory which
governs his behavior. The
Happy Average is a story of a successful marriage. The Turn of
the
Balance brought Whitlock his first substantial public
recognition. The
book is a muckraker without a doctrinaire
ending, such as that of
The Jungle, which had appeared only the year before. But it is not
a
good novel, for Whitlock seems never to
have been clear whether
he was creating character and telling a
story or attacking and ex-
posing the judicial and penal systems.
Essentially it is a sort of study
of the very different impact of these
two institutions on the rich
and well connected and on the poor and
defenseless. Though less
well received than The Turn of the
Balance, The Thirteenth District
now seems a more satisfactory work of
fiction. One of the besetting
sins of novelists who have taken
politics as a theme has been an
effort to take in too much social
territory, if I may so put it, to
make large sociological and confused reflections
on the nature of
the democratic process and to offer
pseudo-diagnostic statements
about its ills. Into this pit, however,
Whitlock did not fall. His book
bears the subtitle "The Story of a
Candidate" and it is just that. Here
is the story it tells. Jerome Garwood
has received the nomination
to congress thanks to the help of his
political sponsor Jim Rankin.
The local editor, Pusey, tries to get
blackmail money in exchange
for support, there being a shady spot
in Garwood's record as a state
legislator. Garwood refuses to pay and
is branded a boodler in the
local press. His fiancee is deeply
shocked. He lets her think the
charge is a lie. Encouraged by the
scandal, Garwood's opponent
undertakes an active campaign. Garwood
persuades his mother to
mortgage her house so that he may pay
campaign assessments.
He is elected and marries. The second
part of the book opens with
the problem faced by Garwood to achieve
renomination. Though the
nominating convention is called
"quick and dirty" by Rankin in an
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effort to get Garwood nominated, the
affair gets tied up in a three-
cornered race, and Garwood is able to
win only after he has made
some sort of secret promise to the
editor Pusey. After his reelection,
Garwood's wife and baby pay a short and
unsuccessful visit to
Washington. Shortly after, Rankin is
given the brush-off when
Garwood appoints Pusey to the
postmastership. When Mrs.
Garwood's father dies, almost all is
left in trust to his daughter, with
only $1,000 to Garwood. Most of this he
loses in a poker game.
Later his wife buys up and cancels the
mortgage on Garwood's
mother's house, still unpaid since
Garwood's first campaign. In
financial difficulties, Garwood gets
his wife to co-sign a note, and then
angry and a little drunk, he tells her
the boodle charge of his first
campaign was true. By renomination time
the primary system has
replaced the political convention and
Garwood is defeated. His
wife pays his debts, and closes the big
old house. He supports the
ticket and hopes for some sort of
political job, but she knows he
will not get it, and is in a way
happier now that the shoddiness of
politics no longer rules his life and
hers.
Except for the introduction of certain
minor characters (not men-
tioned in the preceding synopsis) this
is an able performance. It
has depth of characterization, wit, and
knowledge of the subject.
Garwood is very much of a human
being--not a highly admirable
one, to be sure. He is weak, he is
lazy, but he is not inherently
vicious, and his questionable actions
are brought about by the pres-
sures around him acting on a
not-very-strong character. Whitlock's
wit manifests itself in cynical
observations like these: "A conscience
. . . is about as great an impediment
to a practical politician in these
days as it is to a successful
lawyer" (p. 326) and "The Congressional
Record, where, for the benefit of posterity, the national
politicians
keep a carefully revised record of the
things they wish they had
said" (p. 480). The author's
knowledge of his subject is amply
indicated by the facts of his
experience. Certainly this is one of the
best novels written by an American
author on the American poli-
tician, in many a way far superior to
other novels on the theme
which have for obscure reasons been
better remembered, such as
Winston Churchill's Coniston and
Mr. Crewe's Career, and Paul
Leicester Ford's The Honorable Peter
Stirling. There is no more
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tightly written and exciting scene in
American political fiction than
that in which Whitlock describes the
hotly contested nominating
convention where, as he says,
"Amid all this beauty and mystery
[of Nature], men were fighting one
another, bribing, deceiving and
coercing one another, in order that the
offices of the republic might
be taken from one set of men and turned
over to another set of
men" (pp. 116-117). He makes you
see it, feel it, and understand
it. Alone of American novelists,
Whitlock had both the experience
and the talent to make this sort of
thing come alive.
Once the war years were over and
Whitlock had recorded his
experiences in Belgium, which
must have almost written itself, he
turned again to fiction and produced
between 1923 and 1933 six
books, in addition to two of
nonfiction. Of J. Hardin & Son (1923)
a novel of small-town life in Ohio,
more below. Uprooted (1926)
tells the story of an expatriate
American girl in France. It is in many
ways a slighter and happier Daisy
Miller, with some well-aimed
satirical thrusts at rich American
vulgarians and rotten-at-the-core
European aristocrats. It is amusing,
and sustained pretty well by a
certain consistency of tone, but it is
by no means a great novel.
Transplanted (1927) also has an international theme. It is a story
of Dorothy Manning, a rich American
girl, who has married into
an old and noble French family, and of
her adjustment to and final
acceptance of the role which she has
elected to play. It is a good
workmanlike book, possibly at moments a
bit dull, but informed
with a quiet sort of charm. There are
no quivering Jamesian spider
webs here, and Whitlock's French family
does not take the in-
credible attitude towards American
money of James's Bellegardes.
Dorothy, like Christopher Newman, is
better stuff than the some-
what decadent Europeans, but she is
less quixotic than the James
hero, and has more reality as a human
being. Though the book ends
on a relatively happy note, with the
birth of Dorothy's child and
her escape from the confines of the
stuffy Paris house of her hus-
band's people, through this ending as
through the book as a whole
sounds a note of pathos and controlled
sadness-not only the sadness
of Dorothy's life, but of the life of
all men and all women. This
consistently maintained overtone makes
the book an authentic work
of art.
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In Big Matt (1928) Whitlock
takes up again the theme of
politics. The central problem of the
book is actually a moral one.
Governor Blake has been elected because
of the political sagacity
of the chairman of the state central
committee, Big Matt Holt.
Under pressure and with some misgiving,
Blake appoints Matt to
the public utilities commission.
Stories about graft within the com-
mission get noised about. There is an
abortive legislative investiga-
tion. During his campaign for
reelection Blake learns that Matt
has really been guilty, but he goes on
with his campaign, feeling
that failure to press his cause with
vigor would rouse suspicion.
He makes a great final speech full of
idealism and high moral
purpose, and is reelected. Shortly
after, Matt is indicted by a grand
jury, tried, and convicted. He takes
the rap to protect Blake, to
whom he is devoted and who is in poor
health. So Blake is finally
free to be the straightforward and
honest governor he wants to be.
He goes to visit Matt in jail, wants to
pardon him, but Matt talks
him out of it on the grounds that it
would be politically inexpedient.
So Blake gets credit for being a man of
stricter principle than he
really is, and his popularity as
governor is high. But he doesn't
feel right inside. This book is not so
able a performance as The
Thirteenth District.
Two other books are quite different
from the preceding and
from one another. Narcissus (1931)
is a brief, highly romantic
sketch of an imagined event in the life
of Van Dyck, the story being
woven around and constituting an
explanation of the qualities of
the painting "St. Martin Dividing
His Cloak." Evidently there was
some difficulty in getting this into
print, for Whitlock in a letter
written in September 1930 to Rutger B.
Jewett, editorial chief of
D. Appleton and Company, said: "I
asked you to send back the MS
of Narcissus. Evidently I am
unable to write anything that will
satisfy the editors of our magazines,
and there is something un-
dignified and even humiliating, at my
age, in hawking about MSS.
I will not do it any more. So send the
MS back-or better destroy
it, which would save postage."5
Yet after publication the book
was received enthusiastically by as
discerning a reader as Albert Jay
Nock.6
5 Nevins, Letters, 470-471.
6 Ibid., 502.
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The Stranger on the Island (1931?) apparently came hard. In
September 1930 Whitlock speaks of
having abandoned it. The
story concerns a Mormon colony
established on Beaver Island by
James J. Strang in 1846. Eventually
Whitlock found the key to the
problem presented by this essay at
historical fiction, a type he tried
only this once. Writing to a friend in
1933, he says:
I did, as you divined, take a lot of
pleasure in writing that story, but I
found it no easy job to do. Do you know
I worked on it, off and on, for
nearly four years? (The result I fear
is sadly disproportionate to the time
spent upon it.) But in the first place
I encountered the difficulty, almost
insuperable, that always arises when
one tries to combine fact and fiction.
They are two distinct worlds, and their
inhabitants live on different planes.
The real characters always seem less
alive than the imagined ones, and I
had to put Strang out of my mind, so
far as that was possible, and create
another man with another name before I
could get on with the story. . . .
However, I got the book done finally,
and if you like it I am repaid, for
something of the charm of that lovely
country succeeded perhaps in getting
itself into it.7
It did indeed. And Whitlock's general
observation here brings an
amen when one recollects the wooden
generals and statesmen who
stand stiff and lifeless in so many
historical novels.
In his biographical introduction to
Whitlock's Letters, Nevins
chooses two volumes as having
"qualities of permanence"--the
biography of Lafayette, referred to
briefly above, and the novel
J. Hardin & Son. One is glad to accept the historian's word as to
the former, and to accept the major
part of his single paragraph
of comment on the latter. But to one
whose primary interest is in
fiction this novel deserves more
detailed comment than Nevins
chooses to give, as I am certain he
would agree.
The fact is that despite its solid
qualities and what now seems its
sure and quiet depiction of the quality
and tone of life in a small
Ohio town, J. Hardin & Son made
no great stir on publication and
failed to achieve any substantial
recognition. The book was only
briefly reviewed, and in general the
critics seem to have succeeded
in damning it with faint praise,
whether this was the intention or
not. Apparently the sales were as
disappointing as the reviews and
7 Ibid., 553.
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Whitlock was so discouraged that he
wrote to a friend in May 1924:
"I have been for weeks and months
so depressed and disheartened
by the failure of J. Hardin &
Son to make any impression, or to
receive any recognition, that I have
seriously asked myself if there
were really any use in going on at
all."8
A little glance at the publication
dates of some famous American
novels of the time helps us understand
that the coolness towards
J. Hardin was rooted at least partly in the fact that it was
difficult
to hear its quiet note when so many
literary firecrackers were going
off. Main Street was the smash hit of 1920, and Edith Wharton's
The Age of Innocence, Sherwood Anderson's Poor White, and Zona
Gale's Miss Lulu Bett appeared
in this year also. Babbitt had come
in 1922. In 1923, in addition to
Whitlock's volume, Willa Cather's
A Lost Lady, and Zona Gale's Faint Perfume also saw the
light
of day. Howells was dead and then in
the process of being forgotten,
Dreiser was in the long silence between
The Genius (1915) and
An American Tragedy (1925), Ellen Glasgow had still to attain
the success which came with Barren
Ground (1925). Dos Passos,
Fitzgerald, Faulkner, Hemingway, and
Elizabeth M. Roberts were
still to be heard from. In December
1923, the time of publication of
J. Hardin, the bestsellers among American fiction are listed by
the
Bookman as Gertrude Atherton's Black Oxen, Zona Gale's Faint
Perfume, Harold Bell Wright's The Mine with the Iron Door, James
Oliver Curwood's The Alaskan, Emerson
Hough's The Covered
Wagon, and Willa Cather's One of Ours.
It is clear that Whitlock was not alone
in turning to small-town
midwest America for material. Sherwood
Anderson had already
done three volumes on it, Winesburg,
Ohio, in 1919, Poor White
in 1920, and The Triumph of the Egg in
1921. In these, of course,
Anderson was deeply concerned with
distorted and misshapen
egos, pulled out of shape by the force
of unsatisfactory sex lives
and to a lesser degree by the impact of
industrialism. Honest and
important as his work was, it seems now
to have been a very
special, highly personal Andersonian
message. Main Street and the
two books by Miss Gale (apostate to the
theme of sweetness and
light as dwelling in the Friendship
Villages of America) may
8 Ibid., 351.
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perhaps be best described in a phrase
as malicious cartoons, flashy,
funny, bitter, but not very deep.
Whitlock's book has neither the
mystical, groping romanticism
of Anderson nor the brittle
sophistication and cynicism of Miss
Gale and Lewis. His book is, as Nevins
remarks, in the tradition
of honest realism. It has its
foundation in careful observation and
straightforward recording.
Fundamentally it has much in common
with the literary method of the earlier
Howells, but is free from
the much-criticized Howells prudery. J.
Hardin is a manufacturer
of carriages in Macochee, Ohio, and has
a prosperous business, his
product being noted for the excellence
of its craftmanship. The son,
Paul, after some teen-age sex
adventures, seriously frowned upon
by his father (who also regarded the
drinking of a glass of beer
as a mortal sin), enters the business
and assumes a good deal of
responsibility in the shop.
Mass-produced carriages at considerably
lower prices and of inferior quality
come on the market. J. Hardin
stubbornly refuses to change his
methods or the quality of his
product. As his business declines, he
becomes more and more in-
terested in the Anti-Saloon League,
regarding the establishment
of Prohibition as a crusade, the
dominating aim of his life. Paul
makes fortunate investments, eventually
marries Winona Dyer,
daughter of the richest man in town. It
is a loveless marriage, and
he takes a mistress, a local milliner.
This is no casual affair; he loves
Evelyn. As a result of a fire in the
building containing her apart-
ment, the affair becomes notorious and
Winona goes away. Paul,
lonely and unhappy, stays in town, is
asked to resign as vice
president of the local bank because of
the scandal, does so. Evelyn's
husband dies, and he and she plan to go
to California together.
But at this point he is offered the
presidency of the local bank and
gets word from Winona that she will
come back unless he asks
her not to. After an internal struggle
he decides to keep his position
in Macochee as a solid citizen, to have
Winona back, and to terminate
his affair. He does this, though his
heart is full of love for Evelyn.
It is made clear that since he is the
kind of man his temperament
and life in Macochee have made him, he
was incapable of making
any other choice.
From this very brief statement it will
be clear that the story
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is not extraordinary, the special
qualities of the book resting not
in the story but in the handling of it.
Though the solid craftman-
ship of J. Hardin is given full credit,
the other and decidedly un-
lovely facets of that solidity of
character are by no means over-
looked. The work as a whole portrays
with skill and truth the
puritanical narrowness and dourness of
a midwest small town, its
distrust of any joy, its indifference
to any beauty, its concentration
on material gain, pursued within a
narrowly bigoted social frame-
work. All the persons of the story, and
especially Paul Hardin, are
pathetic in their inability to know how
to live a good life.
It is, as W. E. Woodward remarked in
his review at the time
of publication, "a real book,
genuine, vital, and sincere."9 It deserves
reprinting and rereading as Nevins
says. Or should one amend the
last word to "reading," since
J. Hardin & Son seems to have been
so thoroughly neglected during the
frenetic 20's?
Some successful appeals from the
verdicts of American literary
history have been taken. Let us hope,
then, that future literary his-
torians will speak for Whitlock words
in better agreement with his
achievement.
9 Nation, CXVII
(1923), 654.
A BRAND FROM THE CRITICS' FIRE: OR A
WORD FOR
WHITLOCK
by WINTHROP TILLEY
Associate Professor of English,
University of Connecticut
Now in midcentury, when so much badly
needed revaluation of
America's literary product is going
forward, seems an appropriate
time to speak a word for Brand
Whitlock. The new Literary History
of the United States by Spiller and others mentions Whitlock only
as a single-taxer, a
"humanitarian" and an early realist, and adds
that The Thirteenth District is "concerned with the professional
politician."1 Quinn's
estimate in American Fiction, the most exten-
sive by a literary historian, is
incomplete, and tends to value Whit-
lock's work pretty much in accordance
with its popular reception.2
Even Kazin in On Native Grounds makes
only brief and misleading
mention of Whitlock as the author of The
Thirteenth District,
which is spoken of in the same breath
with that low piece of
hackmanship, Alfred Henry Lewis' The
Boss.
Brand Whitlock (1869-1934) has fared
better at the hands of the
historians than the litterateurs. A
biographical sketch by Allan
Nevins is contained in The Letters
of Brand Whitlock, which ap-
peared under Nevins' editorship in
1936. Whitlock was born in
Urbana, Ohio, and spent his boyhood in
one small Ohio town
after another, his father being a
Methodist preacher. Following his
graduation from high school in Toledo,
he was a reporter for three
years on the Toledo Blade and
thereafter for three years more on the
Chicago Herald. In 1892 he was sent to Springfield as legislative
reporter. He met and admired Governor
Altgeld and in 1893 became
executive clerk in the secretary of
state's office. He also began the
study of law. In 1894 he was admitted
to the bar. Shortly after he
opened a law office in Toledo in 1897,
he became associated with
and in time the close friend of Sam
("Golden Rule") Jones, reform
mayor of Toledo, and on Jones's death
in 1904, ran for mayor on
1 Robert E. Spiller and others, eds., Literary
History of the United States (3 vols.,
New York, 1948), II, 978, 1255;
III, 150, 352.
2 Arthur
H. Quinn, American Fiction (New York, 1936), 635-640.
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